Puddles and Whiskers, WDB The Meeting…

This used to be part of one long section of flying over Stroud, meeting Doctor Marlowe, and then rushing out like something important happened. And it kinda worked, until I started Washing and Dry Brushing the chapter. Now there is a chapter of them flying over Stroud. This chapter of the Meeting. And…I’m not sure, because …

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Puddles and Whiskers, WDB Later That Evening…

The only tweaks, to the dialog. I may, on the last run through, tighten up the dialog, however at the moment their voices shine through. Previously. Later that evening… DB’s Bar, a three-story bar across the street from Puddles and Whiskers office. Local watering hole on the lower floor, trendy afterhours club on the middle …

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Puddles and Whiskers, WDB An Hour Later

Previously. An Hour Later… Standing next to their car after taking Chuck home, Whiskers asked for a second time, “Are you sure about this?” “It’s a sneak and peek,” gesturing towards Tumbledown, “shouldn’t be a problem at all. You got your gear?” Adjusting his katana and tightening his belt, Whiskers nodded affirmative. Finding Black Myst …

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Puddles and Whiskers, WDB Six Hours Later

The revision of Chapter 5 is finished. The last 1/3 rewritten. Enjoy. 🙂 Previously. Six Hours Later… Looking down at the perpetual destruction and mess that was Tumbledown, Chuck asked, “When is the City going to clean up TDown?” “Probably never,” Puddles replied looking around. “There’s no traffic here.” “Usually quiet,” Chuck replied off-handed, “nobody …

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